My mum has had lot of impact on me. She has always tried to show me the way. I think my mother has made me a person I am now. She has always told me what is wrong and what is right. So she has taught me how to live my life. I am in a really close relationship with my mum and I m still speaking with her everyday. She is probably the most important person in my life because without her huge help I wouldn't be the person I am now.
If I describe my mum I would say she is maybe the most kind of person. She never thinks anything bad about anyone and she is always trying to make everyone happy. She is social active person and she really likes to communicate with people. My mum always gets along with all kind of people. She is really friendly and she always tries to help person who is having some sort of trouble.
I like your narrative very much. I can see how much your mother means to you and the reader is able to feel how deep your relationship between you and your mother is. I like that you describe her so in detail because the reader gets to know how your mother behave in most situations.
ReplyDeleteI think there is only one small thing you can add to your article.It is the fact that you could tell the reader an specific situation where you example the feeling for your mother.